My Demo - Distant Voice

[innerdream]

Hi everyone

Would you mind taking a listen to one of my songs – Distant Voice – at my soundclick page at the link below

http://www.soundclick.com/util/streamM3 ... 99056&q=Hi

Your comments and views are most welcome on all areas (guitars, vocals, lyrics, melody / harmonies, dynamics etc)

Cheers

Lyrics
Once I would hear all the doubters in my mind
She saw the dream that I had deep inside
In this reality I saw the picture of my life

From the distant sun I heard your name

Where the truth lies beyond I could hear your distant voice as far as the sun
Where the truth lies beyond I can hear your distant voice as clear as the sun
As the truth lies beyond

I heard her calling from far away
The night is falling I found the way

From the distant sun I heard your name

Where the truth lies beyond I could hear your distant voice as far as the sun
Where the truth lies beyond I can hear your distant voice as clear as the sun
As the truth lies beyond

(©PFM 10/04/2005)

For other InnerDream songs, news, updates etc click on the link below

http://www.soundclick.com/bands/9/innerdreammusic.htm

[Aresius]

only guitar and voice or now you have the whole band

[innerdream]

only guitar and voice or now you have the whole band

At the moment guitar and voice - I'm meeting a guitarist next week who is interested in joining

[Holy Light]

I'd say work on your vibrato when holding out notes. It makes a huge difference.

[Holy Light]

Vibrato on guitar I mean't. You should try to get the vocals higher in the mix on the recordings. (not sure if you have sufficient equipment)

[innerdream]

cheers for the tip Holy Light