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My Demo - Distant Voice

 
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innerdream
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Joined: 04 Nov 2004
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Location: Nottingham, England

PostPosted: Sun Apr 10, 2005 9:12 pm    Post subject: My Demo - Distant Voice Add User to Ignore List Reply with quote

Hi everyone

Would you mind taking a listen to one of my songs – Distant Voice – at my soundclick page at the link below

http://www.soundclick.com/util/ streamM3U.m3u?ID=2299056&q=Hi

Your comments and views are most welcome on all areas (guitars, vocals, lyrics, melody / harmonies, dynamics etc)

Cheers

Lyrics
Once I would hear all the doubters in my mind
She saw the dream that I had deep inside
In this reality I saw the picture of my life

From the distant sun I heard your name

Where the truth lies beyond I could hear your distant voice as far as the sun
Where the truth lies beyond I can hear your distant voice as clear as the sun
As the truth lies beyond

I heard her calling from far away
The night is falling I found the way

From the distant sun I heard your name

Where the truth lies beyond I could hear your distant voice as far as the sun
Where the truth lies beyond I can hear your distant voice as clear as the sun
As the truth lies beyond

(©PFM 10/04/2005)

For other InnerDream songs, news, updates etc click on the link below

http://www.soundclick.com/bands/9/ innerdreammusic.htm

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Aresius
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PostPosted: Mon Apr 11, 2005 12:06 am    Post subject: Add User to Ignore List Reply with quote

only guitar and voice or now you have the whole band

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innerdream
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PostPosted: Mon Apr 11, 2005 12:56 am    Post subject: Add User to Ignore List Reply with quote

Aresius wrote:
only guitar and voice or now you have the whole band


At the moment guitar and voice - I'm meeting a guitarist next week who is interested in joining

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Holy Light
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PostPosted: Mon Apr 11, 2005 5:54 am    Post subject: Add User to Ignore List Reply with quote

I'd say work on your vibrato when holding out notes. It makes a huge difference.

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Holy Light
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PostPosted: Mon Apr 11, 2005 5:55 am    Post subject: Add User to Ignore List Reply with quote

Vibrato on guitar I mean't. You should try to get the vocals higher in the mix on the recordings. (not sure if you have sufficient equipment)

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innerdream
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PostPosted: Mon Apr 11, 2005 6:20 pm    Post subject: Add User to Ignore List Reply with quote

cheers for the tip Holy Light Smile

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