Hi all
Could you take a listen to one of my songs Call Of The Elder - it's in the style of traditional / power metal - your comments are most welcome
Here's the link
http://www.soundclick.com/bands/9/innerdreammusic.htm
Thanks
My Demo - Call Of The Elder
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Re: My Demo - Call Of The Elder
Hey this is better. I like the voice. I think using metronome would be good, now it's a bit out of sync and the tempo seems to be altering.
You planning to get some drums and stuff here? Would be really cool to hear.
The tapping or whatever shred thingy sounds horrible, the solo should IMO build up towards such highlight and it's quite badly played too, but I guess it's easy to fix by just playing it a hundred times to get it comfortable. Hehe. Keep up the good work and find out how you can get the most out of the equipment you have.
You planning to get some drums and stuff here? Would be really cool to hear.
The tapping or whatever shred thingy sounds horrible, the solo should IMO build up towards such highlight and it's quite badly played too, but I guess it's easy to fix by just playing it a hundred times to get it comfortable. Hehe. Keep up the good work and find out how you can get the most out of the equipment you have.
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Re: My Demo - Call Of The Elder
Thanks for the comments - although I don't agree with you regarding the solo (it's is one of the high points of the song for me) constructive critisism is very welcome and I value your opinion - i'll be trying to form a band very soon so the whole thing will sound much more completeJaakko wrote:Hey this is better. I like the voice. I think using metronome would be good, now it's a bit out of sync and the tempo seems to be altering.
You planning to get some drums and stuff here? Would be really cool to hear.
The tapping or whatever shred thingy sounds horrible, the solo should IMO build up towards such highlight and it's quite badly played too, but I guess it's easy to fix by just playing it a hundred times to get it comfortable. Hehe. Keep up the good work and find out how you can get the most out of the equipment you have.
I'll be putting on more songs on the site soon, so please take a listen and let me know what you think
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Yes, the solo is the high point and that's why it should be perfect because it sticks out from the backround and catches attention. The notes are right but maybe they're not played in exactly right order Pretty close anyway, so as I said, I'd like to hear better produced full band version of this!
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UPDATE - Call Of The Elder is now at no. 29 on the soundclick heavy metal chart having risen 15 places on the chart
Once again a huge thank-you to everyone who has listened
A new song will be on the site later on tonight
Once again a huge thank-you to everyone who has listened
A new song will be on the site later on tonight
Metal Now Forevermore
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