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My Demo - Heart Of A Warrior

 
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innerdream
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Joined: 04 Nov 2004
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Location: Nottingham, England

PostPosted: Thu Dec 02, 2004 10:54 pm    Post subject: My Demo - Heart Of A Warrior Add User to Ignore List Reply with quote

Hi all

Would you mind taking a listen to one of my songs – Heart Of A Warrior – at my soundclick page at the link below

http://www.soundclick.com/bands/9/ innerdreammusic.htm

Your comments and views are most welcome on all areas (guitars, vocals, lyrics, melody / harmonies, dynamics etc)

Cheers

Lyrics
All you need is someone to know that your heart is made out of stone
And the dream you’re wishing of is to reclaim mankind’s throne
Day after day, night after night fighting for the cause that will crush the machines
Day after day, night after night destiny so clear

Heart of a man, he’ll make the stand
The warrior, the one the brave

You’ve become a leader of men and you’ll stay through the war until the end
There’s no need now to pretend, you’re the warrior all want to be
Day after day, night after night winning the freedom that once was lost
Day after day, night after night destiny so clear

(©PFM 2/12/2004)

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MaFiaBoY
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Location: Brest, France

PostPosted: Fri Dec 03, 2004 8:59 am    Post subject: Add User to Ignore List Reply with quote

The lyrics are quite good, I'll check out the music when I'll get my computer repaired.

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Neorave
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Joined: 24 Nov 2003
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Location: Omaha, Nebraska, USA

PostPosted: Fri Dec 03, 2004 4:13 pm    Post subject: Add User to Ignore List Reply with quote

Excellent melody and sound. Vocals and a little of the harmonies are a little distorted, try to make the vocals a little clearer, and the timing of your vocals of the chorus is just a little off. Plus (if you can add this), try adding in some drums in this song. Other than that, excellent song!

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innerdream
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Joined: 04 Nov 2004
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Location: Nottingham, England

PostPosted: Sat Dec 04, 2004 11:06 am    Post subject: Add User to Ignore List Reply with quote

Cheers for your views - Hopefully I will be jamming / forming a band ASAP Smile

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Iron_Rider
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PostPosted: Wed Jan 12, 2005 3:49 am    Post subject: Add User to Ignore List Reply with quote

cool song , but it could've been better with drums

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SkullKrusher
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PostPosted: Wed Jan 12, 2005 4:21 am    Post subject: Add User to Ignore List Reply with quote

it's a really good song but it needs drums to give it a driving feel. That's basically it, and clearer vocals, neorave said it all. But it is really good and I like the lyrics.

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innerdream
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PostPosted: Thu Jan 13, 2005 7:18 pm    Post subject: Add User to Ignore List Reply with quote

cheers for the replies everyone Very Happy

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