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My Demo - After Forever

 
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innerdream
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Joined: 04 Nov 2004
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Location: Nottingham, England

PostPosted: Sun Feb 27, 2005 1:51 pm    Post subject: My Demo - After Forever Add User to Ignore List Reply with quote

Hi all

Would you mind taking a listen to one of my songs After Forever at my soundclick page at the link below

http://www.soundclick.com/util/ streamM3U.m3u?ID=2143799&q=Hi

Your comments and views are most welcome on all areas (guitars, vocals, lyrics, melody / harmonies, dynamics etc)

Cheers

Lyrics
Alone and contemplating the future that now lies ahead
The goddess will be waiting, to her beauty I am now led

Who am I? - Ill sail across the sea of life
Where am I? - Searching for a place I could call home
Who am I? - Someone who believed so much
Where am I? - On my quest to free her forever

Fighting in glory for eternity
Ill tell the story forever, forever

A thousand miles Ive traveled, Ive braved the fire wind and rain
The chapter still unwritten, the chance for glory still remains

Who am I? - Ill sail across the sea of life
Where am I? - Searching for a place I could call home
Who am I? - Someone who believed so much
Where am I? - On my quest to free her forever

Fighting in glory for eternity
Ill tell the story forever, forever

(PFM 27/02/2005)

For other InnerDream songs, news, updates etc click on the link below

http://www.soundclick.com/bands/9/ innerdreammusic.htm

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innerdream
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PostPosted: Wed Mar 02, 2005 1:33 am    Post subject: Add User to Ignore List Reply with quote

does anyone have any thoughts on the song? Smile

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Neorave
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Joined: 24 Nov 2003
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Location: Omaha, Nebraska, USA

PostPosted: Wed Mar 02, 2005 9:13 pm    Post subject: Add User to Ignore List Reply with quote

WOW, I haven't been in this part of the forum in a while.

I love the melody, especially the synthesizer in the background.

The only big concearn is balance. The vocals are being outnumbered by the rest of the insturments, it was somewhat hard to tell where you were. Try to up the volume on the vocals, and (if possible) balance the overall stereo sound. I could mostly hear the right side, the left was hard to hear. And (you've heard this from me already) get a drummer, it'll help keep time in the song.

Other than that, overall great song. Keep up the good work!!! Smile

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innerdream
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PostPosted: Wed Mar 02, 2005 10:49 pm    Post subject: Add User to Ignore List Reply with quote

Cheers Neorave - glad you liked the melodies Smile

I have had problems balancing out the left and right side in the mix

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