My Demo - Path Of The Chosen

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My Demo - Path Of The Chosen

Post by innerdream » Wed Apr 27, 2005 3:34 pm

Hello everyone

I would be grateful if you would take a listen to one of my songs – Path Of The Chosen – at my soundclick page at the link below

http://www.soundclick.com/util/streamM3 ... 61445&q=Hi

Your comments and views are most welcome on all areas (guitars, vocals, lyrics, melody / harmonies, dynamics etc)

Cheers

Lyrics
As I look around I’ve left behind the mirror’s saddened eyes
Through this time we ride onwards now forever to our harmony
Far across the sea every path is written in my mind
To the desert sands onwards now forever to our history

We were once so broken
The words have been spoken
The door has been opened
Were walking the path of the chosen

Stars will guide the way right into the heart of every soul
Heroes by my side climbing every mountain as it’s meant to be

There isn’t any other reason
The hope remains for every season

We were once so broken
The words have been spoken
The door has been opened
Were walking the path of the chosen

(©PFM 27/04/2005)

For other InnerDream songs, news, updates etc click on the link below

http://www.soundclick.com/bands/9/innerdreammusic.htm
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Re: My Demo - Path Of The Chosen

Post by innerdream » Sun May 01, 2005 12:26 am

does anyone have any thoughts on the song?
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Re: My Demo - Path Of The Chosen

Post by Stratofanius » Mon May 02, 2005 4:14 pm

The link don't work...

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Re: My Demo - Path Of The Chosen

Post by innerdream » Tue May 03, 2005 6:37 pm

Stratofanius wrote:The link don't work...
it should be working ok now :)
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Re: My Demo - Path Of The Chosen

Post by MaFiaBoY » Tue May 03, 2005 6:42 pm

innerdream wrote:
Stratofanius wrote:The link don't work...
it should be working ok now :)
Gonna listen to your stuff this evening or tomorrow, I'll let you know what I think of it :)
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Re: My Demo - Path Of The Chosen

Post by Aresius » Tue May 03, 2005 9:15 pm

i have listen a couple of songs of u ( you post them in lots of forums jeje ) and they where cool but the quality sucked
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Re: My Demo - Path Of The Chosen

Post by innerdream » Wed May 04, 2005 6:10 pm

Aresius wrote:i have listen a couple of songs of u ( you post them in lots of forums jeje ) and they where cool but the quality sucked
cheers for the comments :) - I like to get a lot of feedback to my music
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Re: My Demo - Path Of The Chosen

Post by NeonVomit » Wed May 04, 2005 7:19 pm

Not bad at all... I'm sure it would be much better with a full lineup
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Re: My Demo - Path Of The Chosen

Post by innerdream » Thu May 05, 2005 6:29 pm

NeonVomit wrote:Not bad at all... I'm sure it would be much better with a full lineup
cheers for the reply :)
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Re: My Demo - Path Of The Chosen

Post by johnny » Sat May 07, 2005 4:30 pm

:) link worked
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