Critic to improve - this is your oportunity to hit :lol:
- Motha-faka
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Silence.
Beethoven sonata (Piano)
adaptation:
based the beethoven piano, was composed, the drums, the complete full simphonic, bass, classical choir.
Observations:
Based to Liberty critic, this second track have less sample effects sounding in the same time.
about choir is more clear but is not modulated but yes was changed some custom presets.
this is a new fusion of music that show you that is original but in the same time is not original
About production.
all was composed by my F.O
all edited, mastered and mixed by F.O
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Silence.
Beethoven sonata (Piano)
adaptation:
based the beethoven piano, was composed, the drums, the complete full simphonic, bass, classical choir.
Observations:
Based to Liberty critic, this second track have less sample effects sounding in the same time.
about choir is more clear but is not modulated but yes was changed some custom presets.
this is a new fusion of music that show you that is original but in the same time is not original
About production.
all was composed by my F.O
all edited, mastered and mixed by F.O
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Re: Critic to improve - this is your oportunity to hit :lol:
this is much better, it's a beautiful version of the original song. The video is well chosen too. The only thing that your brother could change would be to do a version without the talking in the begining. Just put english words on screen in bigger letters of what he is saying.
- Motha-faka
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Re: Critic to improve - this is your oportunity to hit :lol:
yes , he is a disaster talking and singing in englishLiberty wrote:this is much better, it's a beautiful version of the original song. The video is well chosen too. The only thing that your brother could change would be to do a version without the talking in the begining. Just put english words on screen in bigger letters of what he is saying.
maybe you wanna collaborate and record as locutor?, this can be awesome to the jovi proyect
think it, this recentrly start he have only two tracks
you can contact him in mrcooledit@gmail.com
or twitter, or facebook, or google plus
Edit: I need mention that is not that he is a disaster in english, argentinian accent is extra bad for english, he know it extra good, the voice was mod with a pith do simulate a high voice, his voice is more deep and low that this
but ok, he dont have choice or this is or is nothing for now
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- Motha-faka
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Re: Critic to improve - this is your oportunity to hit :lol:
Motha-faka wrote:yes , he is a disaster talking and singing in englishLiberty wrote:this is much better, it's a beautiful version of the original song. The video is well chosen too. The only thing that your brother could change would be to do a version without the talking in the begining. Just put english words on screen in bigger letters of what he is saying.
maybe you wanna collaborate and record as locutor?, this can be awesome to the jovi proyect
think it, this recentrly start he have only two tracks
you can contact him in mrcooledit@gmail.com
or twitter, or facebook, or google plus
Edit: I need mention that is not that he is a disaster in english, argentinian accent is extra bad for english, he know it extra good, the voice was mod with a pitch do simulate a high voice, his voice is more deep and low that this
but ok, he dont have choice or this is or is nothing for now
Youtube: https://www.youtube.com/user/MrCoolEdit
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You are welcome!!
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Re: Critic to improve - this is your oportunity to hit :lol:
the only thing i might maybe do is to take a look at the english phrases because if you use an online translator, in any languages, it's not 100% perfect, sometimes, some translated phrases don't make sense. Even on his website (i like his world section) some phrases need to be fixed.Motha-faka wrote:yes , he is a disaster talking and singing in englishLiberty wrote:this is much better, it's a beautiful version of the original song. The video is well chosen too. The only thing that your brother could change would be to do a version without the talking in the begining. Just put english words on screen in bigger letters of what he is saying.
maybe you wanna collaborate and record as locutor?, this can be awesome to the jovi proyect
think it, this recentrly start he have only two tracks
you can contact him in mrcooledit@gmail.com
or twitter, or facebook, or google plus
Edit: I need mention that is not that he is a disaster in english, argentinian accent is extra bad for english, he know it extra good, the voice was mod with a pith do simulate a high voice, his voice is more deep and low that this
but ok, he dont have choice or this is or is nothing for now
For the accent, he would have to take a course in phonetics in school. For improving his singing voice, i have already put the youtube links for people who give good advice in one of my posts. It's up to him to take a look or not.
- Motha-faka
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Re: Critic to improve - this is your oportunity to hit :lol:
yes, but he forgot his time as musician and singerLiberty wrote:the only thing i might maybe do is to take a look at the english phrases because if you use an online translator, in any languages, it's not 100% perfect, sometimes, some translated phrases don't make sense. Even on his website (i like his world section) some phrases need to be fixed.Motha-faka wrote:yes , he is a disaster talking and singing in englishLiberty wrote:this is much better, it's a beautiful version of the original song. The video is well chosen too. The only thing that your brother could change would be to do a version without the talking in the begining. Just put english words on screen in bigger letters of what he is saying.
maybe you wanna collaborate and record as locutor?, this can be awesome to the jovi proyect
think it, this recentrly start he have only two tracks
you can contact him in mrcooledit@gmail.com
or twitter, or facebook, or google plus
Edit: I need mention that is not that he is a disaster in english, argentinian accent is extra bad for english, he know it extra good, the voice was mod with a pith do simulate a high voice, his voice is more deep and low that this
but ok, he dont have choice or this is or is nothing for now
For the accent, he would have to take a course in phonetics in school. For improving his singing voice, i have already put the youtube links for people who give good advice in one of my posts. It's up to him to take a look or not.
for that he created this techniques of sound, he is extra pacific to be a singer and support all the madness that exist in this time in the world.
the best choice for he is not be singer, but as i tell you before, his forces go into the post production and not more in the voice, this was his own choice
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- Motha-faka
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Re: Critic to improve - this is your oportunity to hit :lol:
Track 3 - wings of destiny
Composers: Luca turilli, Alessandro staropolli, Flavio ontivero
produced by Flavio Ontivero but this is not his mian good skill
Engineer of Mix, mastering and edit by Flavio Ontivero
Video marker by Flavio ontivero
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PD: More classical that the original, the voice cant be like fabio lione and his metal style, always fall in classical color
Come on, critic, hit and we will se if as a good critic or a good production
Composers: Luca turilli, Alessandro staropolli, Flavio ontivero
produced by Flavio Ontivero but this is not his mian good skill
Engineer of Mix, mastering and edit by Flavio Ontivero
Video marker by Flavio ontivero
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PD: More classical that the original, the voice cant be like fabio lione and his metal style, always fall in classical color
Come on, critic, hit and we will se if as a good critic or a good production
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Re: Critic to improve - this is your oportunity to hit :lol:
Another one bite the dust - Queen 2016 Remaster by Flavio Ontivero
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work that i did:
1. Edit
2. master level 1
3. Mix
4. Master level 2
5. No efects aplication why the tracks was recorded with effects, these effects are originally by Queen
6. mastering level 3
Observation, Hit to improve. I'm using a Pillow in my face
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work that i did:
1. Edit
2. master level 1
3. Mix
4. Master level 2
5. No efects aplication why the tracks was recorded with effects, these effects are originally by Queen
6. mastering level 3
Observation, Hit to improve. I'm using a Pillow in my face
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Re: Critic to improve - this is your oportunity to hit :lol:
I'm not more of a classical music, but I like the intro though I noticed that the music has more of a dramatic impact.Motha-faka wrote:Track 3 - wings of destiny
Composers: Luca turilli, Alessandro staropolli, Flavio ontivero
produced by Flavio Ontivero but this is not his mian good skill
Engineer of Mix, mastering and edit by Flavio Ontivero
Video marker by Flavio ontivero
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PD: More classical that the original, the voice cant be like fabio lione and his metal style, always fall in classical color
Come on, critic, hit and we will se if as a good critic or a good production